A Merry Christmas Haiku

Thu 12/25/08

I hope your stocking
is filled with cheer. Your belly,
goodness. Also, ham.

6 Comments

  1. Haiku Nazi

    your haiku, while good,
    comes up one syllable short.
    i will let this slide.

    Fri 12/26/08 at 3:15 pm

  2. Joshua

    The Arithmetic
    Nazis will be on your tail.
    Your counting is off.

    I rock five seven
    five in my sleep where sheep count
    me to keep in time.

    Fri 12/26/08 at 6:22 pm

  3. Haiku Nazi

    Pray tell, is it so
    that you might count one comma
    as an entire beat?

    Sat 12/27/08 at 12:10 am

  4. Jon

    nope. He just counted
    the syllables in the words
    and dominated.

    Sat 12/27/08 at 12:13 am

  5. Haiku Nazi

    I have recounted.
    It appears you were right on,
    and I miscounted.

    But I only strive
    to keep haiku real. Perhaps,
    you can let this slide.

    Sat 12/27/08 at 12:16 am

  6. Joshua

    This thread of comments
    makes me so haiku happy.
    Refrigerator.

    Sat 12/27/08 at 10:09 am

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